See, think, wonder - homework writing

I see New Zealand get heaps of medals at the Olympic Games.  I think Eliza deserved a bronze medal because she dreamed of going to Rio.  I wonder if NZ will get any more medals when they are in Japan in 4 years time?

By Tegan

I saw a kiwi athlete in the women's 1500m race help an American athlete when she tripped up.
The was a very helpful lady to do that. She showed good sportsmanship and she was using her RIPPERS.  I wonder if she was able to finish and whether she was hurt or not? By Matthew